the charts below show the result of a long-term survey carried out by an environmental group into local wildlife population figures. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for the charts below show the result of a long-term survey carried out by an environmental group into local wildlife population figures. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates the principal factors that affect the

wildlife

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population

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while

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the diagram gives us information about

species

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that have been affected by the chart's reasons from 2000 to the present.

According to

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the pie chart, the main cause of changes in

wildlife

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population

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has been habitat destruction by 43%. After that,

population

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, overexploitation like hunting and fishing, and random factor

such

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as accidents have played a significant role by 21%, 15% and 12% respectively.

Moreover

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, disease and the introduction of exotic

species

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have had little effect on the number of changes, under 10% both together. With a look at the graph,

it is clear that

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the number of insects has mostly fallen

as a result

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of mentioned result in the previous paragraph. The second place has been for freshwater fish nearly -30%.

Besides

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, birds and reptiles figures have decreased, but at a much lower rate.

However

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, some

wildlife

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like mammal

species

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and aquatic mammals have increased during

this

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period. In the

mammal's

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mammal

show examples

category

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,category

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the number of hedgehogs has decreased to -8%,

whereas

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bats and foxes figures have risen to 23% and 9% respectively.

In addition

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, in the aquatic

mammal's

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mammal

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group water vole

population

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has fallen to -3% and otters have grown to 9%.

Overall

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, habitat destruction has had a noticeable role in changes in

wildlife

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population

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and insects have been affected more than other

species

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over a period.

tanha.farnoosh

May 1, 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wildlife, population, species with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

230 words

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the charts below show the result of a long-term survey carried out by an environmental group into local wildlife population figures. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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