The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The bar chart illustrated the amount of UK Bachelor’s degree enlistment and Master's degree admission who did not struggle

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jobs after graduating in 2008.

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studies is the highest for both types of recruitment and the smallest statistic is volunteer production.

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study almost 30,000 folk and the second the figure is 17,735 for part-time struggle.

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was unemployment the the amount did not apart far from part-time jobs that much it was lower by around 1,500 crowds

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it is 16,235 nations.

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total is 3500 community which is for voluntary jobs. Let's move on to postgraduate admission from the UK in 2008. Start with

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,study 2,725 population are the highest destination as same as graduate admission. The part-time effort is 2,535. The amount of

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statistic is apart from undergrad recruitment very far almost 7 times.

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total for unemployment and voluntary effort which are 1,625

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respectively.