The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph demonstrates the utilization of 3 types of spreads
margarine
, low fat & reduced spreads, and
butter
from 1981 until 2007.
Overall
, it can be clear to see that before 1996 low fat products did not have a role as much as the others, but the figure for
margarine
and
butter
is very high in 1981.
At the end
of time have reduced till 2007. Focusing on
margarine
and
butter
statistics in 1981 is 88 and 141 respectively, but in 1986,
while
,
margarine
slightly lowed to 88,
butter
raised to the highest point around 19 grams. In 1991 had rapidly decreased to 100
due to
margarine
increasing to the same level of 100,
Finally
in 2007, both of them gradually declined to 50 for
butter
and
margarine
to 40 grams.
However
, low fat & reduced spreads in 1996 had dramatic expansion from 10 to 80 in 1 year after 2000. In 2007 fell to approximately 10,
thus
the sum of consumption for low fat & reduced spreads was 70
at the end
of
period
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  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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