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The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
#hours #work #week #people #categories #activities #childcare #home #housework
The following graph illustrates the average
hours
 of non-paid
work
 done per
week
 by married
women
 and
men
 in different
ategories
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categories
such
 as
,
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 childcare, housework and gardening. The graph shows classifications
such
 as, without
children
, with one to two
children
 and with more than three
children
.
Overall
, the
amout
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amount
 of
hours
 done by married
man
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men
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 is much lower compared to
women
. The most amount of
hours
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
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 on
this
Correct determiner usage
these
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 activities was done by married
women
 with more than 3
children
. They spend up to 60
hours
 a
week
 on
such
 activities. Meanwhile,
men
 in
this
 classification spend only 15
hours
 per
week
 which is the least
spend
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spent
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hours
. Married
women
 without
children
work
 30
hours
 a
week
when
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while
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men
work
 10
hour
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hours
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 less(20
hours
).
In addition
,
men
 with one to two
children
work
 the same as
men
withut
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without
children
. Meanwhile,
women
work
 almost 50
hours
 per
week
. We can see the difference in time
soend
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spent
 by
women
 and
men
.
Women
work
 more
hours
 on unpaid activities, whilst
men
 spend less time on
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
show examples
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, work, week, women, men, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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