Scientist have been warning for many years about the importance of protecting the environment and that we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning, many people do not do this. What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?

Researchers have been alerting
people
for many years for preserving our environment from being damaged and
people
must restrain energy usage in daily life,
,
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in spite of
this
alert community
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not consider
this
warning imperative. In my view,
people
only look for their comfort zone and do not care about the rest of the world and they are not informed enough about
this
protection in school or university. All
people
should have classes about
this
issue in schools or universities for paying attention to the problem. In recent years our environment has been changed by human interactions and has been damaged much compared to the early centuries. Many problems occurred because of producing energy. The energy production process contaminates the air and causes air pollution that triggers the global warming problem. Scientists claim if
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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