The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
To begin
, the pie charts provide information on devices people aged 18-25 used to watch television
channels
in Canada over a 10-year period of
time
from 2009 to 2019.
Overall
, the conventional
TV
had become the least popular method over
time
while
the flat-screen
TV
turned out to be the most famous way in 2019.
Firstly
, in 2009 the least common way of watching
TV
was via tablets which
is
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are
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only 5% but, after 10 years it reached
up
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to 19% with a significant improvement. The usage of desktop computers, laptops and conventional TVs to watch television
channels
got decreased over
time
.
Furthermore
, the number of people who watched
TV
channels
using their mobile phones shows growth from 15% to 26% in 2019 compared to a decade earlier.
Moreover
, the popularity of desktop computers had become reduced by 6% over
time
.
To conclude
, the most common mode of watching
TV
channels
in 2009, which is conventional television had become the least famous method in 2019 with a 30% reduction but, the usage of some gadgets like tablets and flat-screen TVs showed a positive upward trend in 2019 compared to the previous decade.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words channels, time, tv with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • gadgets
  • utilized
  • age categories
  • watching TV channels
  • comparison
  • popularity
  • notable trends
  • increase/decrease
  • devices
  • decade
  • advancements in technology
  • user preferences
  • speculation
  • future trends
  • conclusion
  • implications
  • technology and media companies
  • lifestyle
  • habits
  • target age group
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