The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertilizer (compost)

The diagram demonstrates how to produce fertilizer from organic waste.

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, it is patently obvious that there are five main stages in

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the first stage of the process, the preparation of plastic bottle 2 litter with four airflows. After being cleaned and dry carefully by specialized machinery, organic wastes are added, with the first layer being food, followed by grass, and newspaper on top of the bottle with each layer in 15

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. The next step begins when the mixture is added to catalysis namely nitrogen and hot water to accelerate the chemical decomposition. The bottle

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is sealed to ensure the heat inside the container is escape through the hole airflows. Coming to the final stage, undergoing 6 months, the natural composite is formed and utilized for different garden purposes

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The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertilizer (compost)

In some countries, many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people say it is the responsibility of governments to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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