The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
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The pie chart depicts the main causes of global
land
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degradation and the table demonstrates % and how these causes affected North
America
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,
Europe
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, and Oceania during the 1990s. As an overview, the highest
land
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was degraded by overgrazing
as well as
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it followed by
deforestation
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with the second highest ratio.
Whereas
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, other factors were affected less.
Furthermore
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, North
America
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's
deforestation
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was minimum.
While
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Europe
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's maximum. 0.2% of the
land
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was degraded by
deforestation
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in North
America
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.
While
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the highest
land
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degraded in
Europe
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because of
deforestation
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.
Moreover
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, over-cultivation was 0% in Oceania
nevertheless
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overgrazing was the highest with 11.3%. The highest
land
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degraded in
Europe
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at 23% and the lowest in North
America
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. The main cause was overgrazing for
land
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degradation with 35%.
As well as
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deforestation
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and over-cultivation were (30% and 28%, respectively)
However
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, other reasons for
land
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degradation were only 7%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words land, america, europe, deforestation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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