The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart depicts the main causes of global
land
degradation and the table demonstrates % and how these causes affected North America
, Europe
, and Oceania during the 1990s.
As an overview, the highest land
was degraded by overgrazing as well as
it followed by deforestation
with the second highest ratio. Whereas
, other factors were affected less. Furthermore
, North America
's deforestation
was minimum. While
Europe
's maximum.
0.2% of the land
was degraded by deforestation
in North America
. While
the highest land
degraded in Europe
because of deforestation
. Moreover
, over-cultivation was 0% in Oceania nevertheless
overgrazing was the highest with 11.3%. The highest land
degraded in Europe
at 23% and the lowest in North America
.
The main cause was overgrazing for land
degradation with 35%. As well as
deforestation
and over-cultivation were (30% and 28%, respectively) However
, other reasons for land
degradation were only 7%.Submitted by paramravalia24 on
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