The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps describe an industrial area in Norbiton nowadays compared with plans for future development. As can be seen in the maps, the town will become more residential with the construction of facilities for housing, shopping, and medical care. Another interesting point is that
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change will just occur to the west and north.
In the current town, there is a central roundabout which is surrounded by factories and a road running from west to east. In the future, the roundabout will remain but the factories will become shops,
and houses, and there will be a new hospital built to the southeast. The road running to the east will Remove the comma
apply
also
have housing on either side along with
a large playground and a school.
Outside the centre of the town, there are also
plans for a smaller roundabout in the south. In the north, there will be a bridge over the river and the farmland to the north will be replaced by houses.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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