Some people think that professional athletes make a good role models for young people,while others believe they don't. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

modernized era,many

youngsters

view many

athletes

as

a

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role

model

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models

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and they want to

immitate

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imitate

the way these iconic

person's

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people

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dress,act and their life

condition

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conditions

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.

However

,I strongly believe that these

athletes

arn't

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worty

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worthy

worth

of their "

role

model

" status. Our valuable world and humans are changing rapidly

day

by

day

.

Therfore

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Therefore

,people's mind is changing too,especially

youngsters

. They want to choose a certain iconic

persons

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like

athletes

and they try to imitate these persons lifestyle and behaviour.These

role

models play a vital

role

in

youngsters

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life.

For instance

,they can learn how to

setting

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a goal and

also

teaches

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teach

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valuable life lessons,

such

as teamwork as well dealing with success.Professional

athletes

demonstrate the importance of working hard to achieve a goal or

practicing

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regularly to become good at something.

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a positive aspect of

children

ro

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to

follow them.

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,

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role

models not only influence on child's psychology

,

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but

also

their physical condition too.

For example

,

youngsters

getting

healtier

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healthier

day

by

day

.

On the other hand

,despite

this

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positive aspects,there are

the

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number of advantages associated with them.Professional

athletes

are not always

good

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role

model

.One reason for

this

,when young

athletes

reach a level of fame,it comes with media attention and large financial benefits.

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can lead

children

to

belive

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that money and fame are an indispensable part of sports.

Children

tend to focus more on these aspects,rather than how to play well or how to achieve good results.Another reason,some

athletes

might have

a

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bad behaviour.

For instance

,they might be an alcoholic or take drugs to improve their performance.

This

kind of behaviour

definetaly

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definitely

influence badly on

children

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lifestyle. In conclusion,some people consider that many athletic

role

models influence

youngsters

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development positively,

while

others do not think like that.

However

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I'm

the

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opinion of

athletes

can be

a

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good

role

model

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models

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for

children

only if they focus on the positive aspect of playing sports.