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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph elucidates the
number
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 of residents in Argentina, Indonesia, Italy, and the Republic of Korea in 2003,
along with
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 it, a forecast regarding the future
population
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 for 2025 and 2050 respectively.
Overall
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, the majority of nations are expected to grow in the future, except Italy, in which Indonesia accounted for the largest proportion.
Furthermore
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, the
population
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 density in Argentina is going to undergo a drastic surge.
According to
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 a statistic in 2003, Indonesia has the most residents among surveyed nations at 238
million
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. On top of that, the
number
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 is expected to continue to grow in the next 47 years to 312
million
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 by 2050.
On the other hand
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, Argentina's citizens took up the least proportion in 2003, at 34
million
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, compared to 54
million
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 in Italy. The situation will reverse in 2050, when the former undergoes a dramatic
raise
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 to 63
million
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, compared to the
population
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 of Italy, which indicates a downward trend in the future, and drag the
number
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 down to 45
million
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. Despite that an increase is shown in the
number
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 of residents in the Republic of Korea, the
population
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 remained the same at 52
million
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 between 2025 and 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, population, million with synonyms.
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