The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables show the change
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turnover of Fairtrade-labeled
coffee
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and
bananas
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between 1999 and 2004 in the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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, Denmark,
Belgium
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, and
Sweden
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. In general, the revenue of both
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and
bananas
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in 2004 witnessed
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rapid growth in almost all countries when
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compared with the one in 1999, except
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sales
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of
bananas
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in
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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. The figure
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the
UK
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had the strongest increase among the 5 observed countries. The
sales
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of
coffee
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and
bananas
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rose significantly in the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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, and Denmark from 1999 to 2004. The value of
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in the
UK
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jumped up more than 10 times and the one of
bananas
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went up more than 3 times to reach the peak at respectively 20 and 47
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millions
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euros
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. The amount of
coffee
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and
bananas
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consumed in
Switzerland
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and Denmark had a slighter increase.
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the sale of
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and banana in
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went up by respectively 3 and 4.5
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millions
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million
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euros
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to 6 and 5.6
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millions
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euros
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in 2004, the amount of
sales
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of Fairtrade-labeled
coffee
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and
bananas
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in
Sweden
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rose by 0.2 and 3.4
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millions
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euros
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to 2 and 4
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of
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in order. The
sales
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of
coffee
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increased slightly in
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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by 0.7 and 0.2
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euros
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respectively to 1.7 and 1
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euros
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in 2004.
Conversely
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sales
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of
bananas
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in
Belgium
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and
Sweden
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gradually fell from 0.8 and 2 million
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in 1999 to 1 and 0.9
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euros
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in 2004.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, belgium, sweden, sales, millions, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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