The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives information about the most ten
countries
for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Overall
, China has the biggest portion of production even consumption. China and the United States have extremely high rates in comparison the other countries
. Despite this
, Korean Republic has the smallest proportion.
Firstly
, China’s source made 5,398 kWh
and spent 5322 kWh
of electricity in 2014 so they reached a peak of the list. Their strongest rival is the United States which manufactured 4,099 kWh
and used 3,866 kWh
of electricity. These two countries
have huge statistics and both stages by kWh
are higher than the other eight countries
.
Secondly
, Russia is in a third of the table and they have a little difference between production and consumption which is only 19. After that Japan, India, Canada, France, and Brazil are going down the list until nine that Germany. Germany has a significant difference from other countries
which is that they consumed more kWh
than produced. The Korean Republic is down on the list.Submitted by gokturkmustafaa on
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