The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the most ten
countries
for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Overall
, China has the biggest portion of production even consumption. China and the United States have extremely high rates in comparison the other
countries
. Despite
this
, Korean Republic has the smallest proportion.
Firstly
, China’s source made 5,398
kWh
and spent 5322
kWh
of electricity in 2014 so they reached a peak of the list. Their strongest rival is the United States which manufactured 4,099
kWh
and used 3,866
kWh
of electricity. These two
countries
have huge statistics and both stages by
kWh
are higher than the other eight
countries
.
Secondly
, Russia is in a third of the table and they have a little difference between production and consumption which is only 19. After that Japan, India, Canada, France, and Brazil are going down the list until nine that Germany. Germany has a significant difference from other
countries
which is that they consumed more
kWh
than produced. The Korean Republic is down on the list.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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