The advent of the internet has made it it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal experiences In your essay.

The ways of working are changing with the enormous development of technology.
As a result
, a growing number of people prefer to do their duty from their
home
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instead
of commuting to
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offce
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office
.In
this
essay, I will explore the pros and cons of working from
home
and try to draw some conclusions. I will start by looking at the advantages. One of the major plus
point
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of working remotely is the fact that you do not have
commute
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to work. Millions of workers waste their energy and time every day in rush hours.
For example
, a friend of mine
working
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in the IT sector and he spent around 3 hours
in
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buses
everyday
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to the job on computers which can be done easily at
home
.
Thus
,it saves
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time
of
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employees.
Secondly
, working from
home
gives you much more freedom to manage your job.
For instance
, at
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office
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the workers are supervised by superiors and often need to attend meetings
whereas
at
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home
, they can make their schedule
by
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their own. On
other
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hand, It can be easy to get distracted
while
working at
home
. A normal urge to use
instagram
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for a minute and watch television keeps your focus out
from
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work and
it
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decreases
the
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productivity. Taking my friend's example again to support my view, he received two warning letters from his boss
while
working remotely for 3 months which he
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gotten
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while
his
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career in
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. Another disadvantage of working from
home
is that it cut off the employee from his colleagues which makes him
feeling
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isolate
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.
While
at
office
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, a number of workers do their jobs together and it made relationships but it is not in the case of working remotely.
To conclude
, there are both benefits and drawbacks
of
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working
this
way. Despite the fact it saves time
of
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travelling and gives more freedom, many people find it useless because of distractions and
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of isolation.I believe it is important to keep working and
home
life separate to
acheive
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achieve
right
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work-life balance.
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