The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The graph illustrates fluctuations in the population of individuals who
born
inside the country and for Add a missing verb
were born
people
who born
outside the country and living (urban, rural and town)in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the percentage of people
who live in cities both in and out of Australia
was the highest , while
rural
area of Add an article
the rural
people
who live in Australia
was the least.
To begin
with, In 1995 the percentage of people
who were born in Australia
and lived in cities was about 50%, after which the number rose to 65% in 2010.Furthermore
, the proportion people
living in towns experienced a decrease of 5% to 15% in 2010, which was the same figure as Change preposition
of people
people
in the countryside after dropping twofold from 30% in 1950.
On the other hand
, people
who were born outside of Change preposition
for people
Australia
, city inhabitants reached the
peak of 80% in 2010 whilst the Correct article usage
a
people
in towns remained stable. As for rural citizens,the figure plummeted from 40% in 1950 to approximately 5% in 2010.Submitted by s_syedy on
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