The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The graph illustrates fluctuations in the population of individuals who
born
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were born
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inside the country and for
people
who
born
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were born
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outside the country and living (urban, rural and town)in
Australia
between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the percentage of
people
who live in cities both in and out of
Australia
was the highest ,
while
rural
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area of
people
who live in
Australia
was the least.
To begin
with, In 1995 the percentage of
people
who were born in
Australia
and lived in cities was about 50%, after which the number rose to 65% in 2010.
Furthermore
, the proportion
people
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living in towns experienced a decrease of 5% to 15% in 2010, which was the same figure as
people
in the countryside after dropping twofold from 30% in 1950.
On the other hand
,
people
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who were born outside of
Australia
, city inhabitants reached
the
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peak of 80% in 2010 whilst the
people
in towns remained stable. As for rural citizens,the figure plummeted from 40% in 1950 to approximately 5% in 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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