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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.

#men #women #money #beauty #care #was #root #behaviour #results
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this
 day,
people
 splurge too much money on
beauty
product
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products
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 unlike before,
both
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and women in the past prefer to be natural. In my opinion, it
is depend
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 on the person if they will spend a lot of money on the products as long as they know their limit and gain confidence.
To begin
,
people
 have their own ways on how they want to
be look
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 good, physical appearance is one of the
reason
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reasons
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 why they are self
concious
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conscious
. For them, it is important to put more effort to look perfect because most
of
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the
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people
 judge by just how it looks. Nowadays, many
proffesionals
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professionals
 with tattoos and
piercing
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piercings
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 are accepted in different
field
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fields
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 of work, especially in hospitality where they will communicate direct
to
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 customers.
However
, many years ago numerous of
company
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the company
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 always rejected
the
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people
 how they look,
that is
 why
people
 are afraid to show their appearance because they know that the standard was so high.
Furthermore
, the
beauty
 industry
is offer
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 a lot of treatment for those who just want
natural
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a natural
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 effect.
Also
, surgeries to enhance their face and body parts, not just
women
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for women
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 but
as well as
 men. Time passed by,
people
 are getting aware
on
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of
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 how to respect each other and
appreaciated
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appreciated
appreciate
 the looks of every person. To end, everyone has
unique
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a unique
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beauty
 and it is not just the physical image to distinguish their
beauty
. It is inside for how we value and show our appreciation to them.
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