Your friend is coming over to stay with you. However, you will be away on vacation for a month. Write him/her a letter and say: – How to get the keys to your flat – How to operate the equipment in the flat, and – Suggest a few places of interest to visit

Dear Jhon, I'd like to apologize for being away on your visit to my home town, even though I'm not here you can stay in my accommodation as long as you'd like. I'm going to leave the apartment keys with one of my neighbours Norman, He lives in the same building complex on the 2nd-floor apartment number 25C. I've already told him in advance about your arrival and he will help you to settle in. Once you get into my apartment you may need some instructions to use the equipment in the house ,
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you may feel confused and irritated
due to
not being able to use the tools properly. First of all my place has both a hot and cool water system, you don't have to specifically learn how to set it, it's the big nob located in the kitchen
along with
the thermostat to adjust the temperature.
Secondly
, if you ever wanted to quench your thirst use the juice maker in my fridge, simply put in any fruit pulp of your choice
along with
some sugar and water and turn it on, after a few seconds you can have some fresh juice. If you ever feel bored, there's a jogging park nearby, jump into your sweatshirt and do some workout. I almost forgot! try the local market and buy some fresh groceries as provisions, I heard it has the cheapest prices in the entire neighbourhood. I often visit the town Museum to observe their new collection of fossils. I'm eagerly waiting to hear from you. Best wishes, Devin
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