The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbinton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the present and future restructuring of an industrial area in a town called Norbinton.
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, factories in the industrial site will be totally replaced by houses and a bridge will be constructed over a river that leads to the farmland. At present, the town of Norbinton is located on the west of the industrial area. There is a roundabout that has factories developed around it and a road heading from the east and south of it.
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, there are factories along the east highway from the roundabout. The farmland can be observed on the north of the area across the river. In the future, the south trail from the roundabout will be connected to another roundabout with a way on the west and south of it. Ships and medical centres will be built on the southwest and southeast of the main roundabout respectively. Another roadway will be constructed from the north of the main roundabout with a bridge across the river which will lead to a housing unit near the farmland. The southeast route will have industries replaced with houses and a short path that connects to a playground. The same path will end directly at the entrance of a school.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • site
  • current
  • proposed
  • expand
  • facilities
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • roads
  • business park
  • airport
  • size
  • layout
  • comparisons
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