The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.
The given process chart depicts the information about the making of
power
via water.
It is lucid from the diagram that water is stored in the dam by reservoir
and it is pushed by Add an article
the reservoir
a reservoir
intake
process to the narrow tunnel Correct article usage
the intake
reffered
Correct your spelling
referred
as
Change preposition
to as
penstock
. Add an article
a penstock
In
the end of the Change the preposition
At
pipe
a turbine is attached to generate electricity. The generator is fixed with the turbine to rotate it. After that produced electricity Add a comma
,pipe
is send
to the powerhouse build where Change the verb form
is sent
generator
is placed. And, Add an article
the generator
a generator
power
is send
to the people in different sectors like Change the verb form
is sent
office
,industries and housing by Fix the agreement mistake
offices
a
long distance Correct article usage
apply
power
lines. In
Change preposition
At
last
the water is again mixed in the river and the process reeats
.
Correct your spelling
repeats
Overall
,it is clearly seen that many steps are evolved to generate hydroelectricity. If any step is omitted it may halt the whole production of power
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power with synonyms.
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