The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.

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The given process chart depicts the information about the making of

power

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via water. It is lucid from the diagram that water is stored in the dam by

reservoir

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the reservoir

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and it is pushed by

intake

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the intake

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process to the narrow tunnel

reffered

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referred

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to as

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penstock

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a penstock

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the end of the

pipe

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,pipe

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a turbine is attached to generate electricity. The generator is fixed with the turbine to rotate it. After that produced electricity

is send

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is sent

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to the powerhouse build where

generator

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the generator

a generator

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is placed. And,

power

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is send

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is sent

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to the people in different sectors like

office

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offices

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,industries and housing by

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apply

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long distance

power

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lines.

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last

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the water is again mixed in the river and the process

reeats

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repeats

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,it is clearly seen that many steps are evolved to generate hydroelectricity. If any step is omitted it may halt the whole production of

power

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words power with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

139 words

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The diagram shows how electricity is generated by a hydroelectric dam.

Art should be a compulsory class for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others however argue that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

An increasingly number of professionals , such as doctors and teachers , are leaving their own poorer countries yo work in developed countries . What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation ?

Many people are opting for several careers as compared to a single career to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The natural resources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve this problems ?