In some countries, fastfood restaurant and supermarket give money to school to promote their products.do you think this is a positive development or negatively development?

In certain regions of the world ,it is becoming a

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that shopping

mall

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and

fastfood

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fast food

fast-food

facility

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now give incentive to educational

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to advertise their goods.In my perfective ,I think

this

is a negative development because most of these places promote some unhealthy

practices

like excessive

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which can

cause

long term illness to these children.

To begin

with,there are demerits of

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to collaborate with

authority

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of

school

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to promote

such

products to youngsters because

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that time,they may not know the right things to take for them to

healthy

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Ultimately ,these can

cause

long term diseases when they grow up and can death or permanent damage to their organs.A good illustration of

this

,

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is a survey that was carried out in Sidney which recorded

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deal of diabetes among young

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because they

were expose

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to some commodities that

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encouraged by their lecturers.

Moreover

,

this

can

cause

many chronic diseases like blindness,kidney failure and other medical conditions that can be detrimental which will not promote the health of those children.

Furthermore

,these are wrong

practices

that may not enhance the image of schools since they

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in illegal

practices

that can encourage parents to sue the university or secondary from continuing their jobs especially with those market products or food does not follow the usual standard of recommendation of routines .

Hence

,

this

lead to poor

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portray

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of the academy setting and will make guardians

to

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withdraw their kids from those

school

and

this

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pave

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way

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for unemployment and financial burdens.

For example

,a good

scenerio

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scenario

of

this

happened in William academy,whereby

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of parents came together to sue the primary

school

because the

school

advertise some sugary products to children which they consumed

excessiveky

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excessively

excessive

without the awareness of their parents and the

school

was closed from teaching .

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,schools need to

be stop

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themselves from criminal

practices

that disrupt their image and report

such

incidents to

police

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force to ensure those

managements

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are

arrest

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or pay

for

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fine

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. To recapitulate,I think these are

wrong

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approaches for eatery and shopping malls to give academic

institution

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finances to broadcast their items and food because it might lead to sickness that can

be

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cause

death or lead to

bad

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image of the

school

that will make them

form

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from

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performing

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their duty .