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The total number of male and female college graduates through the years between 1995, 2005, 2015

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college
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alumnus
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 from 1995 to 2015. Generally, the
number
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 of
men
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college
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 degree holders is much higher than
women
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graduates
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 through the years. In 1995, around 37000
women
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 graduated from
college
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, which is less than 6000
graduates
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 of
men
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. But in 2005, the total
number
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 of male
graduates
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 increased much more than in 1995. The numerals of male
graduates
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 multiplied by 17000 that year to 60000.
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 the proportion of
women
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graduates
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 extended by 3000,
then
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 reached to 40000. In 2015, the total
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 of
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 escalated even more, with male
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 boosted dramatically than in previous years
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77000.
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, the
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 of female
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also
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 increased to 50000, but the
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 is still much lower than the figure
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 male
graduates
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 shown in
this
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 graph. In summary, the total
number
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 of
college
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alumnus
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alumni
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 continuously increased over the two decades, from 1995 to 2015 ,
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however
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women
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graduates
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 were lower than
men
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college
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graduates
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 indicated in
this
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 bar graph display.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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