The total number of male and female college graduates through the years between 1995, 2005, 2015

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from 1995 to 2015. Generally, the
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of
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degree holders is much higher than
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graduates
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through the years. In 1995, around 37000
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graduated from
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, which is less than 6000
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of
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. But in 2005, the total
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of male
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increased much more than in 1995. The numerals of male
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multiplied by 17000 that year to 60000.
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the proportion of
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extended by 3000,
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reached to 40000. In 2015, the total
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escalated even more, with male
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77000.
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, the
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also
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increased to 50000, but the
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is still much lower than the figure
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shown in
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graph. In summary, the total
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of
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continuously increased over the two decades, from 1995 to 2015 ,
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were lower than
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indicated in
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