the graph below shows average carbon dioxides emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons were relevant

the graph below shows average carbon dioxides emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

summerize the information  by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons were relevant
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The line graph demonstrates average carbon dioxide emissions per person in metric
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between 1976 and 2007. It shows
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average in the United
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kingdom
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, Sweden, Italy and Portugal.
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, the graph illustrates changes
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emissions
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four countries in five different years. It is observed that
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the highest level of carbon dioxide emissions per person is for the United
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kingdom
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and
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the lowest level is for
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Portugal in 1967.
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Italy and
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Portugal had a huge increase generally
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Sweden and the united
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slight decrease.
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, the average of carbon dioxide in
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Sweden started from 8
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in 1967 and it rose slightly up to 10
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.
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, it went down hugely for three years.
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the united
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range started from 11
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and
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went down slightly up to 8
tones
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tones, kingdom with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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