The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The given chart illustrates the percentage of people who lived in their own homes and others who rented a house, in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
In 1918 the household in rented accommodation is about 77%. twenty years later it shows a slight decrease and has reached under just 70%. From 1939 to 1953 it remains stable and in 1961 it reached 59%. In 1971 both of them are equal and show 50%.
On the other ,hand the household in owned accommodation experienced a gradual increase. in 1918 it's approximately over just 20% and with a slight ,growth it reaches one second in 1971. from 1971 to 2001 the population who rented an apartment shows a steady decrease and it reaches a little above 30% and after 10 years it illustrates 35% which is a marginal increase.
in ,addition the number of humans who have a house increased until 2001. in 2001 it reaches a peak and experiences 68%. After 10 years in ,2011 it decreases gently and reaches 65%.
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