More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating
Nowadays companies and
also
people are tending to communicate about work subjects or social life with technological devices more than face to face. The main benefits of this
are comfort and saving time, and, however
, the key drawbacks are less
active life and not healthy friendships.
Chatting with Correct article usage
a less
friends
or having meetings
online at home more
relaxing than going somewhere. Because we don't need to dress up Add a missing verb
is more
specially
for it and stay with our home outfits. Replace the word
especially
Furthermore
, doing some preparations is taking time. If we are going to restaurant
or office which is far away from home , we need to go to those areas either Correct article usage
a restaurant
with
bus or taxi. Change preposition
by
For example
, In Istanbul/Turkey, most of the companies organizing meetings
online because of the
traffic congestion.
Correct article usage
apply
However
, with the
technological development, most Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
the
people already doing their Correct article usage
apply
households
with the help of Fix the agreement mistake
household
the
machines. As they are less active than before, Correct article usage
apply
with
having discussions online Change preposition
apply
worsening
their situations. Another disadvantage is that expressing feelings Wrong verb form
worsens
not
Add a missing verb
is not
obviously
. When we are having Change the word
obvious
chat
with our Correct article usage
a chat
friends
, we like to watch our reactions about the subject we are talking about. But while
we are talking or discussing on Add an article
the internet
internet
we can not show our feelings properly. Correct your spelling
Internet
For instance
, with pandemic
namely Covid-19, most of the Correct article usage
the pandemic
companies
or Change noun form
company's
companies'
friends
group Change noun form
friends'
friend's
meetings
limited
Add a missing verb
are limited
with
Change preposition
to
internet
and lt become a habit even after the contagious disease.
In conclusion, organizing Correct article usage
the internet
meetings
online and talking with friends
on Whatsapp is saving time and more comfortable. However
, we should be more active psychically and having
fun next to each other.Wrong verb form
have
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...