You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The way people have their diet by sitting with each other in former times is going to be changed.
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trend has several reasons,
such
as hectic work
schedule
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and eating at expensive places in order to flaunt, which put various deleterious effects on their family attachment and relationships The first and foremost point of causes is that the individuals are working
hardly
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and have busy
rountine
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routine
.
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is because, they are not able to come
at
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their
accomodations
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accommodations
accommodation
in
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certain
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time, so their family members are starting to eat their meals
,
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when they require.
Moreover
, some masses
are
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want to disclose their high status to their peers by giving their treats daily in
the
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restaurants, which makes them addicted to it
due to
this
they feel uncomfortable
while
eating at home with family members.
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, in
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multi national
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companies, employers sometimes have
order
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to go home
next
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day, so in these conditions having meals
together with
family members is quite arduous.
However
, these things put
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impact on relations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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