You recently organised and old a meeting for your company. Which took place in local hotel. In their feedback, participant at the meeting said that they liked the hotel but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the managers should do to improve the food in future
Dear MK,
I hope
this
email finds you well. I would like to thank you for hosting the meeting last
week at your hotel However
, there were some participants who were not satisfied with the food
that was offered for Lunch.
Let me clarify the situation. Last
Saturday, Our meeting was held at your hotel from 4 pm till 9pm then
after the meeting I got some feedback that the participants liked the hotel as it was very tidy and organized and also
they liked the accommodation , but they did not like the food
as it was served two hours late. Additionally
, it was cold and even there wasn't veggie food
for vegetarians.
I would like to suggest you offer the food
in the buffet so it will keep the food
warm and everyone will able to get their preferences easily and even the food
will serve on time.
Thank you for your consideration.
regards,
ImanSubmitted by imanmuhamed.3089 on
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