The line graph shows visits to Disneyland and sea World from 2001-2005. the bar chart shows the most popular rides and attractions in Disneyland. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
of visitors
who visited Disneyland
and sea World from 2001-2005. The second bar chart depicts the famous rides and attractions in Disneyland
.
Overall
, the highest number
of visitors
to Disneyland
and Sea World happened in 2005. The lowest number
of visitors
was in 2001. The most popular ride in Disneyland
was splash mountain, and the lowest was a jungle cruise.
The blue line graph shows the people who visited Disneyland
. The number
started in 2001 at 9 million
and extremely increased every year, in 2005 the number
was 51 million
which was the highest. The red line graph depicts visitors
who visited Seaworld. The calculation began in 2001 at 11 million
guests and rose till 20015 at 27 million
people. The trend increased for Disneyland
and SeaWorld in 2005.
The famous attraction in Disneyland
was Splash Mountain with 12 million
guests. Following by a Haunted mansion with 9 million
visitors
. Next,
Big Thunder Mountain got 4 million
in attendance. Metter haunt bob sledge just got 3 million
visitors
and the most unpopular ride was the jungle cruise, the attraction just got 2 million
guests.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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