The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time.
The first line graph shows the data for tourists who travelled by train and the other line gives information on the
proportion
of on-time running of trains in Sydney between the Use synonyms
years
1995 and 2004. A period of 10 Use synonyms
years
.
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Overall
, it can seem that in the Linking Words
year
,2001 the number of people who travelled to Sydney was the highest and the lowest was in 1995. For another line graph in the Use synonyms
years
1999 and 2002 was the highest and there has the same percentage of on-time running. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the lowest on-time running was 2004.
Linking Words
Firstly
, the highest Linking Words
proportion
of the Use synonyms
year
tourist travelling by train was 300 Use synonyms
million
. Followed by the Use synonyms
year
2002 was 280 Use synonyms
million
and 2003 was 278 Use synonyms
million
respectively. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the lowest was 250 Linking Words
million
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, the highest Linking Words
proportion
of on-time running was 93 per cent in the two Use synonyms
years
1999 and 2002 and declined in 2003 was 90 per cent. Use synonyms
In addition
, in the Linking Words
year
2004 the Use synonyms
proportion
rapidly declined was 71 per cent.Use synonyms
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