The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

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The given pie charts illustrate the production of some kinds of energy in France between 1995 and 2005. In general, gas and coal contributed more than half of the total energy and had a minimal change after 10 years.

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nuclear and others were produced more during

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period,

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petrol

consumed less than in 1995. Looking at the charts for more detail, the productions of coal and gas were almost equal at approximately 30% in 1995. Over a period of 10 years, there was a slight rise of 1% in both products.

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, starting at the same amount of production in 1995,

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suffered a significant decline by 10% to reach a fifth after 10 years and ranked at the 3rd place. Meanwhile, nuclear and other resources went up from around 5% in the year 1995 to reach their peaks of 10.10% and 9.10% in 2005, respectively.

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The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

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