modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. this has have negative effect on their social lives.

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messaging have decreased the quantify of time
people
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pay out meeting with their
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has
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a negative impact on their social existence. I strongly opine that
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messaging and
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can not influence
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people
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's
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life
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and their relationships, cause of social
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media
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,
people
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can communicate with each other, even if, between them
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a long distance.
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with, messaging
help
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us, to do not forget about our
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, even if, we are far away from our hometown and close
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us
people
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. We can talk with each other cause of
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and
messagings
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messages
.
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birthday
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a birthday
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bash, you can send an invitation letter to your
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, and thanks to
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you can meet with your
friends
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,
therefore
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,
messagings
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messaging
messages
is a really good way to be in touch.
Email
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and sending messages
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a tons
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of bad sides too. First and foremost, even if,
people
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are in the same town but they whatever chatting with each other, and do not meet,
in
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this
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occasion,
messagings
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messaging
messages
can have
an adverse effects
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an adverse effect
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on
people
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's
life
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. Plus, if
person
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a person
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will stay at home,
do
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not go out, and any relationships only
at
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emails
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,
person
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becomes closed.
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, my own view on the matter is, messaging and
email
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have
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not
bad
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affect
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effect
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on
people
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's
life
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. Thanks to
email
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,
people
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keep in touch with their close for them
people
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,
furthermore
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, we can not put
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blame on social
medias
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media
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for making
people
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's
life
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more easier
,
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and helping them to be in touch with each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern forms of communication
  • email
  • messaging
  • reduce
  • amount of time
  • see friends
  • social lives
  • technology
  • communication
  • faster
  • convenient
  • stay in touch
  • connect
  • online
  • social media platforms
  • meet new people
  • face-to-face interactions
  • maintain relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • social isolation
  • digital communication
  • emotional depth
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