Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Food

has been considered the fuel of human beings

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, with water,

it

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is the most important element to survive.

Moreover

, it is becoming a central topic of discussion in our society because nowadays the quality of

food

is decreased

due to

overfarming of animals and crops.

Thus

, it is agreed in the educational system that students should study the

science

of

food

and how to prepare it.

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essay analyses the importance of a deep understanding of

this

topic in our society, which has to be considered at the same level as other

subjects

, and the approach of countries that already have given importance to

this

topic. We all know the sentence “

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are what we eat” and it is absolutely true.

Hence

, we should give more attention to

this

argument because it is strictly related to our well-being.

Subjects

such

as mathematics and history are truly relevant

as well as

science

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of what we eat because if we know what and how to eat well the percentage of illnesses can decrease.

Furthermore

, the expectation of life can increase.

For instance

, if we think about

well balanced

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diets

such

as the Japanese and the Italian

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, studies show that following them can increase life and reduce

probability

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the probability

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of sickness.

For

this

reason, learners should have a deep understanding of it as traditional

subjects

.

Moreover

, there are some countries

such

Italy

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and France that already give the right attention to the

science

of

food

. Indeed, during high school students can choose an academic pathway focused on

this

argument. In these types of

schools

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the basic teaching areas are still taught but there are

also

lessons dedicated to how to prepare our “fuel”. In

this

way, students obtain

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understanding of normal

subjects

, but

also

they are prepared

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a professional pathway

such

as chef and nutritionist.

On the other hand

, educational environments, that only transmit theoretical knowledge, can’t prepare you for a

working-life

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after high school.

To conclude

, we should teach the

science

of

food

as an important subject, because it is at the base of our life. A deep understanding of it can lead to

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more well-being that could benefit the entire society.