The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the procedure for producing building materials,
cement
and concrete.
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, the procedure involves 7 main processes in total to prepare mixed concrete for building use, including 5 stages in the process of making Linking Words
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First of all, limestone and clay are squeezed together by a crusher to become a powder Use synonyms
mixture
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crosses through a mixer and arrives rotating heater. At stage three of the process, the Linking Words
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heated by a flame in the rotating heater. After that, Grinder is used to grind the Linking Words
mixture
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cement
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Finally
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packed into bags for later use.
To make mixed concrete for building use, there are totally four ingredients that need to be added into a concrete mixer to produce concrete, Linking Words
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, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel, which consists of small stones. Before becoming a fully mixed concrete Use synonyms
mixture
, the concrete mixer has to be rotated clockwise consistently.Use synonyms
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