You have been working for a company for some time, and other rival companies are willing to employ you with a higher salary for all the practical experience you have gained. Write a letter to your company manager and in your letter explain the situation, say what you would like the manager to do (increase the salary etc.), say what action you would take in case the manager fails to meet your demands.
Dear Mr Aliyev,
I am writing to say that some companies are inviting me to a job with a high wage, but I find that I need to notify you of it.
As you know, I have been working for your company as a dressmaker for 2 years. During
this
time, we have worked as very good colleagues. I must say gratitude to you for this
. However
, a company which is located near my house is proposing me as a tailor for my experience.
They are going to give me more earnings. Furthermore
, their time at work is less than ours. This
is more comfortable for me. Yet, I would like to request some things from you. If you provide me with enough money, fare to arrive at your work-shop, and decrease working time, I will not change my employment. If not, I will leave your company.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Kholida TurgunovaSubmitted by chartakinnovation on
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task response
Ensure all requirements and expectations are clearly addressed in the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Improve the clarity and connection in the greeting and closing of the letter.