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The graph lines the differences of female unemployment between four contries for two years. All this countries in the UK.

#lines #differences #unemployment #four #contries #two #years #countries #uk
The graph lines the differences
of
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 female
unemployment
 between four
contries
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countries
 for two years. All
this
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 countries
in
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 the UK.
Overall
, all countries lowered on
percentage
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the percentage
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 of
unemployment
, only
Scotland
 rose on
this
 ranking.The biggest
difference
of
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in
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percentage
 was in Northern
Ireland
 - exactly, one
percent
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. In
the
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2013
in
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England was the highest
percentage
 of
unemployment
between
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among
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 females,
however
, in 2014 the first place was in
Scotland
. After England and
Scotland
 in 2013
was
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 Northern
Ireland
 with 5.6% .
While
, in 2014 Northern
Ireland
maked
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made
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bigger
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a bigger
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difference
 than Wales,
there by
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jumped
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 on the top. The
difference
 between
two
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the two
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 years in England was only 0.3% and
this
 is smaller than in Wales - 0.4%.
This
 is
a positive information
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, that
unemployment
between
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among
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 females fell, in comparison with
Scotland
 with
increasing
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an increasing
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percentage
. Getting back to the details, the biggest
difference
 was in Northern
Ireland
. If total
percentage
 of
unemployment
 in 2013 was 23.9%,
while
 in 2014 was - 22.8%.
According to
this
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these
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 facts, we can recognise that
percentage
 of
unemployment
 between
four
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the four
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 countries decreased
more
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by more
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 than one
percent
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per cent
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.
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