You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The chart depicts the generated powers in billions of two wide countries. From an
overall
perspective, in the year 2009, the countries taken into consideration are namely France and
Germany
. Visibly clearly, the two resources from where the electricity is coming are Renewables and All Sources.
To begin
with, in the year that has been mentioned already, all type for the case of
Germany
, reports 59.6% for conventional thermal, whilst 23% for nuclear and 17.4% for renewables. Renewables
instead
, illustrates Biomes 39.3%, Wind 36.8%, Hydroelectric 17.7%, Solar 6.1% and
last
but not least, with the lowest rate of 1, Geothermal.
On the other hand
, France shows a visibly higher fee, compared to
Germany
, for nuclear, or rather 76%. A quite similar situation is for the case of Hydroelectric, which has a major fraction of 80.5 than other pie charts.
To sum up
, with has already been analysed, it's dominant to highlight that,14 years ago, the proportions of France, reached the highest percentage, rather than
Germany
.
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