The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
The graph illustrates data regarding the rights of possessing a vehicle in China.
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, a steady increment can be seen in the number of vehicles per thousand people over the years, from 1987 to 1999. There are less than 500 vehicles owned by 1000 people in the
year
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1987 and there was only a little
increase
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in the numbers until 1993.
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, there was a dramatic
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from the
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1993 to 1995,
where
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the number of transports increased from around 1000 to nearly 2000, with figures doubling. From 1995 to 1999, their rate of
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is greater than the rate of
increase
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in the previous 6 years.
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, the increment steps were exceeding 1000, from the
year
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1997 to 1999. In the
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1999, the
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of vehicles exceeded 4000 per one thousand people.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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