The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
The graph illustrates data regarding the rights of possessing a vehicle in China.
Overall
, a steady increment can be seen in the number of vehicles per thousand people over the years, from 1987 to 1999.
There are less than 500 vehicles owned by 1000 people in the year
1987 and there was only a little increase
in the numbers until 1993. However
, there was a dramatic increase
from the year
1993 to 1995, where
the number of transports increased from around 1000 to nearly 2000, with figures doubling.
From 1995 to 1999, their rate of Correct word choice
when
increase
is greater than the rate of increase
in the previous 6 years. Furthermore
, the increment steps were exceeding 1000, from the year
1997 to 1999. In the year
1999, the amount
of vehicles exceeded 4000 per one thousand people.Change the quantifier
number
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