Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other claim that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Provide specific reasons to develop your essay.

Some individuals believe that they are able to learn by
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consider that it
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to have a tutor. In
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and I will include my own opinion.
First,
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due to
time
and high prices
people
prefer
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self-study
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individuals can make their schedule and they are able to study when
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have free
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it can be
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appropriate
for their self-study.
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,
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can make
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for himself, because he knows his learning abilities.
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takes any course it can be short term and
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of them. Turning to the other side of the argument, in my opinion
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professionals should help
people
who want to learn. Because
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during learning
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himself
person
can meet any questions and it may be difficult to comprehend or to solve
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and it will be easy to cope with
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.
Besides
,
people
may learn many
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data but it may be not
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essential
for that course.
To conclude
all mentioned above some
people
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by themselves
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of budget and
time
.
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believe guidance by
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is important. In my view
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