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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.

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Modern ways of
communication
such
 as
email
 and messaging have reduced the amount of time which is
people
 spend on meeting with their
friends
.
This
 has had a bad influence on their social life. I believe that spending a great deal of time with their
phones
 may bring benefits,
,
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 I see no great merit in that occasion.
Initially
, there are a number of advantages to using modern forms of
communication
. By using
email
 or messaging, they can develop a broader outlook.
This
 is because nowadays most
people
 use their
phones
 in order to keep in touch with their
friends
 who lives in foreign countries.
For example
, the young generation has a particular liking for making
friends
 from overseas these days, but their parents do not give them permission to go abroad. Now they are using actual ways of
communication
.
As a result
, they want to stay in touch with their
friends
.
As well as
 it leads to forming a good relationship between them. Apart from ,
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 there might be types of
people
 who do not like to talk with
people
face
 to
face
. Texting helps them to ease their feelings or fears. I,
however
, firmly believe that texting or using
email
 could bring about negative implications for individuals. First of ,all now most of the young
people
 want to chat with their
friends
 by using their
email
. Sometimes they meet
face
 to
face
 and at that time if they use their
phones
 in front of them,
then
 it just gets on their nerves.
This
 is because everyone wants to be at the centre of attention.
Therefore
, they should turn off their
phones
 during their conversation. Second of all, there are various
people
. Some of them are introverts. Their parents
face
 difficulties to turn their introverted children into extroverted
people
. But,
this
 type of
communication
 makes it more challenging. Because
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,now most citizens do like to stay at home and use their
phones
. Taking everything into account, children can benefit from the modern types of
communication
,
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 in my opinion, they will come across different problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern forms of communication
  • email
  • messaging
  • reduce
  • amount of time
  • see friends
  • social lives
  • technology
  • communication
  • faster
  • convenient
  • stay in touch
  • connect
  • online
  • social media platforms
  • meet new people
  • face-to-face interactions
  • maintain relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • social isolation
  • digital communication
  • emotional depth
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