Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives.

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and messaging have reduced the amount of time which is
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spend on meeting with their
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has had a bad influence on their social life. I believe that spending a great deal of time with their
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I see no great merit in that occasion.
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, there are a number of advantages to using modern forms of
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or messaging, they can develop a broader outlook.
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use their
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in order to keep in touch with their
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who lives in foreign countries.
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, the young generation has a particular liking for making
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from overseas these days, but their parents do not give them permission to go abroad. Now they are using actual ways of
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, they want to stay in touch with their
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there might be types of
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who do not like to talk with
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, firmly believe that texting or using
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could bring about negative implications for individuals. First of ,all now most of the young
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want to chat with their
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by using their
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and at that time if they use their
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it just gets on their nerves.
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, they should turn off their
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during their conversation. Second of all, there are various
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. Some of them are introverts. Their parents
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difficulties to turn their introverted children into extroverted
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,now most citizens do like to stay at home and use their
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in my opinion, they will come across different problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern forms of communication
  • email
  • messaging
  • reduce
  • amount of time
  • see friends
  • social lives
  • technology
  • communication
  • faster
  • convenient
  • stay in touch
  • connect
  • online
  • social media platforms
  • meet new people
  • face-to-face interactions
  • maintain relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • social isolation
  • digital communication
  • emotional depth
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