The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The given bar graph portrays the spending on three categories of various
age
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groups in the UK in the year 2004 .
Overall
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, it's noticed that ageing is related to more spending on food and drink as the expenses on that certain service kept gradually rising with it ,
on the contrary
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, the opposite occurred to money spent on restaurants and hotels where it kept declining with every
age
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group with just a slight rise in the end .
To begin
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with , Food and drink kept growing
subsequently
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with the
age
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categories starting at just over 5% for people under 30 and reaching the highest point at under 25% for ages 76 and beyond , the entertainment industry saw followed the same growth trajectory , being
initially
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above 5% and slowly rising reaching a little more than 20% for the 65-75 category
then
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steeply decreasing to slightly less than 15% in the
last
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age
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stage . As for the
last
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service , namely restaurants and hotels the total dedicated budget kept fluctuating over time starting at a high point at just a modest margin of under 15% to reaching the least amount spent of all at less than 5% by individuals aged 61-75
then
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in the end , saw a meagre surge reaching a bit higher than that rate .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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