The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first diagram illustrates the life cycle of a silkworm,
while
the second diagram shows the production of
silk
cloth
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there are four stages illustrated in the process commencing with producing eggs on mulberry leaf and ending with an adult
moth
. Production of
silk
cloth
starts with selecting a perfect cocoon and ending with dying. The first stage is when the adult
moth
lays eggs on a mulberry leaf. After ten days, larvae hatch from the eggs
then
they will eat mulberry leaves as food . At
this
point in the cycle ,the small larvae produce
silk
thread in order to protect themselves from risk for a few days. Over time, the larvae change to become a
moth
and
leaves
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leave
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the cocoon. At the
endi
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end
of
this
stage , an adult
moth
emerges and the life cycle starts again. The second diagram shows that the production of
silk
cloth
begins with selecting the perfect cocoon.
Then
, they are boiled in hot water.After that, they are unwound in order to get thread ranging from 300 to 900 m.
After
this
stage, the thread is twisted and weaved .
At the end
of
this
process, the twisted and woven
tread
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thread
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is dyed so as to produce
silk
cloth
.
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