The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first diagram illustrates the life cycle of a silkworm,
while
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the second diagram shows the production of
silk
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cloth
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are four stages illustrated in the process commencing with producing eggs on mulberry leaf and ending with an adult
moth
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. Production of
silk
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cloth
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starts with selecting a perfect cocoon and ending with dying. The first stage is when the adult
moth
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lays eggs on a mulberry leaf. After ten days, larvae hatch from the eggs
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they will eat mulberry leaves as food . At
this
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point in the cycle ,the small larvae produce
silk
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thread in order to protect themselves from risk for a few days. Over time, the larvae change to become a
moth
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and
leaves
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the cocoon. At the
endi
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end
of
this
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stage , an adult
moth
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emerges and the life cycle starts again. The second diagram shows that the production of
silk
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cloth
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begins with selecting the perfect cocoon.
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, they are boiled in hot water.After that, they are unwound in order to get thread ranging from 300 to 900 m.
After
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this
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stage, the thread is twisted and weaved .
At the end
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of
this
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process, the twisted and woven
tread
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thread
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is dyed so as to produce
silk
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cloth
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words silk, cloth, moth with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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