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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table portrays the population numbers for four nations in 2003 and
also
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 displays the predicted growth in numbers in the coming years of 2025 and 2050 .
Overall
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 , it's noticeable that Indonesia is the most populous among all states , both in the past and the future and continues to surge,
on the contrary
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, Italy is shrinking in population size .
To begin
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 with , both Argentina and Indonesia have expected to witness growth in the coming decades , with almost 28
million
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 and 74
million
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 more newborns respectively, expected to be part of the countries by 2050 .
On the other hand
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 ,the remaining
countries
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country
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 Italy doesn't have a bright future as the numbers are projected to decline in Italy from 54
million
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 in 2003 to a 47million by 2025 and a 2
million
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 decrease in 2050 ,
however
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 , The Republic of Korea is in a slightly better state as it's speculated that it might get a meagre 4
million
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 increase corresponding to 52
million
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 in 2025 and
remaining
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 the same in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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