The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.

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The given pies depict the ratios of the major sources of energy used by the USA in

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1990. Looking

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May 11, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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1 paragraphs

23 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sources of energy
predominant
renewables
nuclear
significant increases
significant decreases
technological advancements
policy changes
trends
overall
preference
shifts
implications
future energy landscape
decades

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The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.

Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

in spite of advancements made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

You are going on holiday next week and you need to ask your friend to watch your dog while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • state how long you will be away • tell them what needs to be done • state how you will compensate them