The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times we have had an increase in online shopping and certain individuals believe it will lead to the closure of shops in towns and cities.
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we have reasons to agree with
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, I disagree with
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notion and in
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essay, I will state my reasons.
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, online shopping has been helpful to a lot of people especially the working class who have limited time to visit the market. With
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, they are able to stay in the comfort of their homes or office and place an order for most
items
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on a website.
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, for
items
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manufactured in a location far from the buyer, they can be ordered online and shipped to them.
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, we have goods produced in China or in Vietnam and they are displayed on a particular website and
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can be purchased and shipped to the buyer's location in Nigeria.
On the other hand
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, we have a lot of fashion
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that are better off bought in a physical store. Personally, I have purchased dresses and shoes online which were sent to me and were not my
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.
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, I purchased a dress online in a large
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but it was delivered as a medium-sized dress.
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, I had to return the dress and incurred extra costs for shipping.
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, I bought
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footwear on a website and it was delivered two sizes smaller than my
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.
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in turn can
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lead to me wasting money as I end up giving the item out or I have to wait for so long to get it replaced. Another issue is with household utensils and perishable goods. Purchasing these
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online is not favourable as they might get to the buyer damaged and in terrible conditions in the process of delivering the item.
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, an individual decides to order foodstuffs like tomatoes or glassware like mugs and plates online. In most cases, the tomatoes are delivered rotten,
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the mugs and plates are delivered broken
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of carelessness by the delivery man which can be avoided if an individual goes to personally purchase the
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. In conclusion,
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online shopping is a great medium for obtaining goods and services, it can never lead to the closure of all stores in towns and cities as individuals avoid getting
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they cannot use
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of the wrong
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and will have the luxury to pick from various design and check different stores.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
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  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
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