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You are going to teach English to your friend's child. write a letter to your past English teacher to ask if you can borrow some books from him/her. Say how will you know your friend Describe the qualification and experience that your friend has Explain why your friend would be suitable for this job

#english #friend #child #teacher #books #qualification #job
Dear Sir I am writing
this
 letter to request you regarding your English book for some time to teach my friend's child. Primarily, I know my friend very much because we are childhood friends and neighbours. we are helping in any situation.
Besides
this
, John wants my assassistanceth his son's study in English and should need some books related to that subject to teach him.
Furthermore
, he is workingaccountountant manager in the Finance Department of the Tata motor company. His qualification is in Masters's in computer and has 3 years of experience in managing data.
Moreover
, he is excellent at English which is why he wants books
then
 he can easily teach the grammar role to his child. All in all, my friend would be suitable for
this
 job
while
 studying his child he will be familiar with that language's basic rules.
Apart from
this
, he is very intelligent and his way of teaching is effective.
That is
 why It would be a superior opportunity for him. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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