The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart above illustrates how much electricity is produced and consumed in ten different geographical areas in 2014, namely
China
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, the United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea. Units are measured in billion kWh. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is evident that the first place in both production and consumption takes
China
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with the largest results. To be more specific, more than 5000 billion kWh. Meanwhile, the worst result is made by Korea – approximately 500 billion kWh.
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, it is crucial to emphasise that the United States place a second step in the entire chart. In comparison with
China
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, there is no objection that the difference between the US and
China
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is not significant.  Notwithstanding, if comparing the third country in rank, namely Russia, with the former, namely
China
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, it can be seen that there is the most substantial difference between them.
China
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's result was enhanced
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hour (MWh)
  • capacity
  • output
  • distribution
  • consumption
  • production
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • trend
  • pattern
  • discrepancy
  • regional
  • anomaly
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