The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams illustrate the development of Youngsville in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005.
Overall
, it is evident that the area experienced a number of significant changes.
Additionally
, a large number of natural woods were chopped down and converted into industrial buildings and public places. From 1980 to 2005, the hospital, school, and airport in the west of
the
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Youngsville remained unchanged. Noticeably, all of the trees to the south of the Alanah
river
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River
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were cut down and replaced by an industrial zone. The houses along the
river
were demolished and transformed into a warehouse. The woodland next to the airport was cleared to make way for many factories. It is noticeable that there was a demolition of the plants and accommodations to the north of the
river
to construct a park, and a stadium in order to meet the needs of the residents.
Moreover
, the
rainway
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railway
runway
was extended from the
river
to the North and a Marina was constructed at the mouth of the
river
.
Furthermore
, the houses along the southern railway were knocked down to build some skyscrapers.
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