The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate
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for
emmigration
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emigration
immigration
Overall
, people tended to come in and out this
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country
quest
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the quest
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for
opportunities for employment and education.
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To begin
with immigration, 30% of immigarnts
moved to the UK to look for Correct your spelling
immigrants
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while
12% of them required employment whether full-time or part-time. Besides
, foreign students also
dominated just over a quater
of the Correct your spelling
quarter
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property
foreigner
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foreigners
this
kingdom stood at 15% and those who came with other motivetions
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motivations
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resisted
whereas
6% of immigrants did not mention any reasons.
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emigrants
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the emigrants
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other
or no reasons or who just wanted to move showed their rate at more or less 15%. Change preposition
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However
, nterestingly
, only 4% of people who emigrated attributed their reason to Correct your spelling
interestingly
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