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Government investment in the art such as, music and theater is a waste of money.goverment Must invest money in public service instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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The
governments
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government
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 investing in
art
 is a normal and old way business in which the
government
 invest more but, recently public demand has made it not important.
therefore
, I will agree that
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authority
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 should spend
money
 on the construction of good
Roads
 and good
water
 supply being more essential than
art
.
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 shall be expatriates in the essay.
Government
 should spend more
money
 on social needs
such
 as
roads
 than
art
 because not everyone loves
art
 despite the fact that it has its own
health
 benefits but having good
roads
 superseded it. For ,example when one is sick and he needs to access
health
 care on time with good
roads
, Heath care service will be rendered without any complications But when the
roads
 are bad the person's condition will become worst along the journey and death might occur.
In addition
 to the above
government
 should invest more in good
water
 supply.As we all know that
water
 is the major requirement for a man to survive on Earth, after getting access to
water
, if the
water
 is unhygienic it will jeopardize the person's
health
. Good
water
 results in a good community and state.
For instance
, when people are always getting sick
due to
 the unhygienic drink they consume the
government
hims
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this
 will not have peace of mind, and
money
 will be wasted on drugs
instead
 of achievements in
health
,
moreover
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 if care is not taken life will be lost. Conclusively,
in contrast
 to the
Government
's investment in
the
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art
such
 as music and , theatre I will agree that
money
 should be diverted to public services like the construction of good
roads
 and good
water
 supply.
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