Government investment in the art such as, music and theater is a waste of money.goverment Must invest money in public service instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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governments
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investing in
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is a normal and old way business in which the
government
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invest more but, recently public demand has made it not important.
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, I will agree that
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the authority
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authority
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should spend
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on the construction of good
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and good
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supply being more essential than
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should spend more
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on social needs
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as
roads
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than
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because not everyone loves
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despite the fact that it has its own
health
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benefits but having good
roads
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superseded it. For ,example when one is sick and he needs to access
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care on time with good
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, Heath care service will be rendered without any complications But when the
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are bad the person's condition will become worst along the journey and death might occur.
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should invest more in good
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supply.As we all know that
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is the major requirement for a man to survive on Earth, after getting access to
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, if the
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is unhygienic it will jeopardize the person's
health
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. Good
water
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results in a good community and state.
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, when people are always getting sick
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the unhygienic drink they consume the
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will not have peace of mind, and
money
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will be wasted on drugs
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of achievements in
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if care is not taken life will be lost. Conclusively,
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to the
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's investment in
the
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apply
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art
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such
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as music and , theatre I will agree that
money
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should be diverted to public services like the construction of good
roads
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and good
water
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supply.
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