Some people saysManufacturing company have the responsible of reduce the cost of packing while some argues that customer should not buy goods with package, discuss both views Ang give your opinion

Recently, the packaging of
goods
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one of the factors considered in marketing.It is the means of attracting buyers and enticing a
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of customers.But, nowadays,some people are of the opinion that producers and shopping malls should reduce the cost of packaged
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goods
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while
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others
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that
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consumers should stop buying
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that
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a
lot
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of packaging. Both views will be discussed with relevant examples,and a conclusion will be drawn.
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,one of the things that
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manufacturing companies that produce the same product is the way they package their
goods
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.A
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of funds are put into
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because of
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the competition
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that occurs in the labour market.
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of companies are into detergent making
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. Nowadays
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nowadays,
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people prefer
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product to Omo because of the way they package their products
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it is made available in different colours and sizes.A
lot
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of money is put into the advertisement and
packing
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packaging
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so there will be an increase in the
amount
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consumers purchase it.
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, customers can
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purchase
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with little packaging because it is
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less expensive
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than the packaged ones.
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will help them to manage their income
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they will be able to get as many
goods
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as possible with the little money they have.
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, the
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used in getting one pack of Dettol soap can be used to get double packs of Joy bar soap.Not considering the
amount
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of packing, customers will get more
goods
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with
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any
amount
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they have.With
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, people will get to purchase what they need and get the desired outcome from the product. In conclusion,from
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point of
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views
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I support that consumers should avoid buying packaged products because it is more costly.They should go for less packaged ones since it will
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give the desired results.

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