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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 chart gives information about
the
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further
education
 in Britain making a comparison between men and women. It
also
 illustrates who attended full-time or part-time
education
 in three specific periods.
Overall
, the number of young people who studied
part time
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part-time
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 is extremely greater than the ones who chose full-time. In fact
men
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men's
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 and women's
average
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 never reach more than 300 thousand people.
In
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 the other
hand
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 the lowest data that shows full-time students is almost 800 thousand.
This
 means that since 1970 students have considered
more
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 convenient
studying
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 for a shorter period of time per day. The average of girls
into
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 both full-time and part-time
education
occured
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occurred
 a
gradually
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 growth every ten years. As well the little amount of men who chose full-time has increased by only 50
thousands
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thousand
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 every ten years. In 1990/91 part-time
education
 drastically has grown reaching the highest,
while
 full-time
education
 seems to be the exact amount for both
sex
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sexes
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: around 300 thousand.
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